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What can you do to give your email press releases a better chance of getting read? Here, based on blunders I see frequently in press releases emailed to me, are six electronic press release sins to avoid.
1. Dull Subject Lines
Remember, the subject line on an email press release works like the headline on a printed
release. It is a hook that will entice an editor to read the release - or to delete it
unread. Send me an email that has a subject line that reads "for immediate release" and
I'll yawn and hit the delete key unless I'm really short on material or just plain bored.
Just as bad: a press release that shows up with a subject line that reads (no subject).
Hey, if you can't be bothered to figure out what's important about your news release, why
should I bother to open the mail and read it?
2. Unbelievable subject lines
Your subject line must grab the editor's attention, but only for the right reasons. If the
subject line is unbelievable or has a double meaning, it will doom your release to electronic
never-never land, or worse, make it the laughing stock of the editorial department. A good
example is a release that hit my email box recently. It had a subject line that read:
FAX MACHINES SUFFER A MORTAL BLOW
What was being promoted was an alternative to traditional fax transmissions. An interesting subject, to be sure. But all this release did was to conjure up images of irate editors smashing their fax machines with sledge hammers to stop them from spitting out mindless press releases and ads. So the headline got copied into my all-time funnies file, and the release got moved into Outlook's Deleted Items folder.
3. CC Follies
Nothing is more annoying to a busy editor than opening an email letter and discovering you
have to scroll down through dozens of names to get to the body of the letter. Nothing, that
is, other than being reminded that all the publications that compete with you are being sent
the same press release. To avoid annoying writers and editors learn how to use the blind copy
function in email. You wouldn't include a CC list in press releases you print and mail out.
Don't do it in email, either.
4. $$$$!!!!! Madness
Repeating dollar signs and exclamation marks in your subject line or text makes your press
release look like an opportunity scam. If you want editors to take your news release
seriously, ditch that type of pitch and replace the hype with persuasive facts.
5. Press Release Spam
While it may not cost you any extra money to send press releases to media that never runs
stories on the topic of your release, it could cost you an email account. If the release
looks like an ad or gets sent to hundreds of editors and writers who never cover the topic
you're promoting, some of them may complain to your email provider. If enough do, the provider
may close down your email account without any warning.
6. Fatal Attachments
The fastest way to make your press release hit the recycle bin is to send it through as
attached mail. Attachments take more time to read since they require the editor to save the
file to disk, switch to a word processing program and hunt for the directory the file was
saved into before they can see what the release is all about. What's worse is that attachments
can carry viruses, password sniffers or trojans. Editors and writers usually will not open
such mail from strangers. Often, they won't open them from people they know, either.
The Key to Success
Once you've eliminated these fatal flaws, your email press releases will at least stand a
chance of getting read. If you target your press releases to editors and writers who regularly
write about the subject of your release, and write the releases with the media's audience in
mind, you are much more likely to get the publicity you seek.
Janet Attard is the author of Business Know-How: An Operational Guide for Home-Based and Micro-Sized Businesses With Limited Budgets. Published in October, 1999, by Adams Media, Inc., the book contains tips, hints, and ideas to start, manage and grow your business. It is available in bookstores throughout the country, in online bookstores and on the BusinessKnowHow.com(sm) web site www.businessknowhow.com. For additional information contact Janet by email at attard@businessknowhow.com.